Saturday, September 1, 2012

New Orleans Poetry


Hurricane Katrina


          I went on two mission trips to New Orleans with my high school over the last few years.  We worked for a whole week helping to rebuild houses that were destroyed in hurricane Katrina.  There is still so much damage that hasn't been repaired and so many people who still haven't been able to go home even after six years.  The media has moved on and so Americans forget that people are still suffering.  Many of the locals were so stunned that volunteers were still coming to help them, especially a bunch of teenagers.  They couldn't understand that not only were we there when most students were having a relaxing spring break, but that we were there because we wanted to. 

New Orleans Museum
          Some of my favorite memories include going to the Katina Museum.  We went there my first year on our last day before we left on the plane.  It was beyond anything the best museum I'd ever been to.  Everyone who goes to New Orleans should have to stop and visit.  It was an incredibly moving experience.  Every single one of us, even the high school boys and the dads were crying.  Another thing I loved was a preacher who had our whole group spontaneously singing Amazing Grace for all of Cafe du Monde.  It was freezing cold my first time.  Every day was around 30 degrees F with about a 27 degree wind chill.  We had only one heater and we put it in what would be the bathroom of the house we were working on.  During breaks we'd huddle in there, all 15 of us in this tiny little room trying to keep warm.  I spent a lot of my time under the house digging holes so I was at least out of the wind.  But I went numb after the first few minutes.  The parents took us to get hot chocolate or coffee twice a day.  Once we even drove around in the big van during lunch just so we could have the heater on.  There was a Goodwill that we stopped by several times just to get more layers to keep warm.  The second year, a lot of people were sick, including our leader Mrs. McCrady.  We all worked together to get things done and take care of each other.  It was like a huge family.  
Cafe Du Monde
          I love Mrs. McCrady.  She's an English teacher at the high school and she's super funny.  You can definitely tell that she had a lot of older brothers growing up.  She's sarcastic and hilarious and strict, but in a no-nonsense amusing way.  
          My first year there I wrote a poem one night while sitting on my air mattress.  They put it on the website where they put updates everyday for the parents.  I got so much wonderful feedback for it that I entered it in an annual big Library writing contest.  I won second place in the poetry division.  The only sad part was that to enter it in the contest, I had to limit it to 20 lines.  I kept both versions because I liked the original version best.  This is the long version:


Building Ships

Down in New Orleans
Down by the levy
The hammers are knocking
The wheelbarrows are rolling
The bricks are piling
The cement is pouring
The paint is drying
The drills are buzzing
Walls go up
As the waters
Go down.

In the sun
In the rain
In the heat
In the sleet
We’re building
Drilling
Stacking
Sawing
Screwing
Nailing
Painting
Lifting
Digging
Measuring
Carrying…

Building

But what exactly?

A house appears
Slowly
As if emerging from a mist
Walls, foundation, roof, windows, door.

But that’s not
What we’re building.

For we build ships
Big and small
Grand and poor
All lasting longer
Than any structure would.

In the ships we build
People sail
They leave the island
Where they’ve been trapped
For so long
They sail home,
With songs of joy,
In the ships we build.

But the best ships of all
No one will ever see
No one will ever sail
For we’re building friendships

We build houses
With our hammers and nails
And in between  the blows
When the tools are silent
We build our friendships.

We build structures
With boards and bricks
However,
It’s everything but
The act of building
That truly builds
The ships.


          This is what I wrote at the bottom to explain my thoughts:


I was thinking of how the physical work we do isn’t what’s important.  It’s what we do while we build and in between the work that truly builds things that will last longer than houses.  Whether it is a relationship with the homeowner,  your classmates, yourself, or God, the invisible things that you build are infinitely stronger.  If the world suddenly vanished, we’d still exist.  Our physical bodies would be gone.  We’d have no houses, no food, no water.  But we’d still have unbreakable chains holding us to each other and to God.  Wood and brick are just a symbol of the greater things that we are building that will last forever.
- Darlee Hart-

           A few weeks later I wrote this while thinking of the people's great strength and the ruined houses with nothing left but a pair of front steps that I'd seen.

Stairs to Nowhere

(written shortly after my New Orleans trip)

Life is a stairway.
At birth you start
With only your foundations.
Throughout the years
You work your way up
Higher and higher
As your life grows.

Down in New Orleans
Just last week
I saw some stairs
Made of gray concrete.
They led up
To a lot of nowhere.
The house that had once stood
Was completely gone.
Only the front stairs
Were left to show
Where someone’s world
Used to be.

For those people
Their life’s stair
Had collapsed
Before their feet.
They couldn’t go on.
They couldn’t go back.
The fear was crushing.
The anger was bitter.
The grief was sharp.
I cried for them.
My heart ached
Empathizing
Feeling their pain.
I wasn’t sure
I’d survive the blow
If I stood
In their shoes.

Then I saw something
That astounded me.
I saw the multitudes
Crippled by tragedy
Rise back to their feet.
The stairs before them
Were still crumbled
Beyond recognition.
They reached down
Back to their foundations
Past everything
That had been built
Upon it.
From it
They drew strength.
Their eyes lit
With new courage
And faith
Made only stronger
 By the grief.
Slowly
Oh so slowly
They sorted through
The debris
Of once had been
Their lives.
Stone by stone
They rebuilt the stair
Before them
And continued up
On their journey. 

The steps they built
Were at first
Feeble and shaky.
They tottered
Nearly falling.
Suddenly others
Hundreds and hundreds
Of caring souls
Reached out
Helping hands
To aid the injured.
They supported them
And assisted
In the rebuilding

I watched with
Deep admiration.
Before I knew it
My hands had joined
The rebuilders.
But we’d never
 Have succeeded
Without the firm
And unshakable
Foundation
They had built upon
In the Lord.

God bless.
Build your
Foundation
On his word.
Climb your
Life’s stairs.
And one day
They’ll end
At his doorstep
Right where
We all started.
God bless you
As you climb.



          The people of New Orleans had an inner strength that they had to fall back and rely on when everything else was taking away
.  Many of them really had to rely on their faith in God.  It was all they had left.  God's love was the only thing that had been with them their whole lives and would never be taken from them.  It was the foundation that they had built everything on and that they once again had to reach down to.  One can't help but be amazed by the strength of the people and their gratefulness and cheerfulness in the face of tragedy.  It makes you think...would I be as strong as them in their position?  Would I be able to smile like that and crack jokes in my southern drawl like my world hadn't been altered forever?  Would you? 

        



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